Wednesday, December 17, 2014

A fun moment

I'm working on editing the 2nd book in my 2 book series and this little tidbit popped out from the dark corners of my brain.  I love this moment!

“Nice shooting!”  Asha complimented.  “I’ll get it.” She ran past him grabbing the dead bird. Out of the corner of her eye she saw a movement, only a fleeting shadow.  At first she didn't think anything of it but as she walked back toward him she saw what she thought was hair.  She stopped, frozen in her tracks watching and listening to the surrounding trees. At first there was no sound, he looked at her his eyebrows knitting together in a question.  

From behind the trunk of a tree there came a hulking figure.  The hair on the figure was brown and caked with mud.  The long maw was filled with sharp teeth and a lolling tongue; it looked at her with a harsh glimmer in its eye then sprung. 

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